《命运简史》个人翻译 忧愁之书 Verse 1:8 Leviathan


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年五剧情CG中的萨索娜(萨瓦图恩)与蠕虫

一、前言

         上篇翻译有幸被黑盒系统推送,获一部分读者的好评与鼓励,距上一篇翻译已是一周有余,今天为大家带来忧愁之书第一章第八节个人翻译版本。

         本篇所译原文来自命运2官方背景故事书《命运简史》第一册黑镜,该文章内容主要为《忧愁之书》的第一章第8节,讲述了邪魔族三姐妹遇到利维坦受到其劝导但没有听从的相关情节,以下我将把自己根据个人理解所作的一版个人翻译于此发布与诸位共享。

  • 该文由本人通过查询翻阅加之个人理解进行翻译,非官方版本,部分内容并非精确

  • 翻译水平有限,主观倾向大(由于个人想法可能会在语言语序上略做调整),意译为主

  • 每段译文后会附上英文原文,部分地方有出入在所难免,各位命学爱好者可参照阅读

  • 鉴于本人才疏学浅,英文水平不高,初次接触命运简史相关内容的读者或可考虑先行阅读一些大佬对于相同文章的正经准确的直译,以免对某些内容产生误解。

二、正文

利维坦

Leviathan

利维坦之警告

The Leviathan's Warning

++吾等生存于战争边缘—

++We live on the edge of a war—

一无形与有质之争++

一a war between Formless and Form++

++天穹与深渊之战一

++between the Deep and the Sky一

++我洞见万物,我远见卓识++

++MY EYES ARE WIDE,MY GAZE IS LONG++

一纵览宇宙,为我所见++

一Across the universe, as far as l see++

++天穹所致,予生之火一

++the Sky works to charge its fires一

一深渊之为,噬烬于墟++

一and the Deep drowns the ash++

—天筑此境,祥和为生++

—Sky builds gentle places, safe for life++

++钟此源洋,护其万民—

++Beloved Fundament, refuge of trillions—

一天穹珍视,此中沃土++

一The Sky treasures this rich place++

一深渊亦在,如影随形—

一BUT THE DEEP IS HERE WITH US—

++冰寒逻辑,试我心墙—

++Cold logic tests our walls—

一深渊其欲,统治之权++

一The Deep claims its dominion++

++无情之至,终焉之刻—

++A ruthless, final age—

奥拉什之辩驳

Aurash's Protest

古老利维坦,神秘之造物,此世间非避难所。

Old Leviathan, creature of myth, this world is norefuge.

我辈命数苦短而亡于黑暗,风暴悬于顶而永无止歇。

We live short, hard lives. We die in the dark.The storm above us will never end.

神威骇浪尽噬我等将不久矣。我等之上,唯欢悦云潮、可怖之物、灭世之月而已。

And soon the God-Wave will take us all.Above us there are only stormjoys, monsters, and moons of apocalypse. 

让我们下潜,潜至或将发掘真理之地,取复仇之力向叛者复仇,获此末世之际生存希望。

Let us go down, down,where we may discover truth, some power to avenge ourselves upon our betrayers, some hopeof survival.

利维坦之希望

The Leviathan's Hope

一是何力量唤汝等++

一What power calls you++

++决意潜至深渊处?一

++Down to the deep?一

++是何冲动驱汝等?—

++What instinct draws you—

一远离至高之希望?++

一Away from high hope?++

一薄命子民听我言++

一Quick-breeding krill people, l tell you++

++万古争端吾阅遍一

++For eons l have watched your struggle一

一紧握生存之锋面++

一Clinging to the sharp edge of survival++

++取道天渊两界间一

++Balanced between the Deep and the Sky.一

++尔辈吾视为珍宝—

++You were my treasure—

一抗衡绝望之证明++

一My proof against despair++

—此为深渊之所求—

—FOR THIS IS THE DEEP CLAIM—

++生存之争为存续—

++Existence is the struggle to exist—

—抗争似将失败时++

—When the struggle seems lost++

++安定居所败落刻—

++when the safe place crumbles—

一万物向渊求其生++

一everything turns to the Deep to survive++

++吾蔑视深渊之欲求++

++I REJECT THE DEEP CLAIM++

—短命汝辈且返回++

—You will turn back, sweet krill of hope.++

++回归天穹之怀抱—

++You will choose the Sky instead.—

希洛的反对

Xi Ro's Protest

汝等苍老巨大之物!我辈命数苦短。

You are huge and old! Our lives are short and desperate. 

若此道为世本貌,我辈决然不相与!

lf that's the way the world's supposed to be, l won't have it! 

若叛者当享胜果,我辈决意不纵之!

lf people like Taox are supposed to win, I won't let them! 

我欲入世更其道,凡碍我者皆诛之!

I'll beat the world until it changes! I'll kill anything in the way!

利维坦之哀歌

The Leviathan's Dirge

++此等致命逻辑++

++This fatal logic++

一请听我之悲鸣!—

一Hear my monopole scream!—

++此将毁灭尔等++

++It will consume you++

一尔等谎言之前—

一Before you lies—

++唯死亡之崇敬++

++The worship of death++

一唯毁灭之道路一

一The ruinous path一

++天穹将铸新生++

++The Sky builds new life++

一抗衡毁灭开端一

一Against the onset of ruin一

++趋向祥和世界++

++Towards a aentle world++

一深渊拥抱死亡一

一The Deep embraces death一

++自言其为必然++

++Saying: this is inevitable and right++

一其为欲望祸根一

一l exist as hungry ruin一

++灭世路前迷途知返++

++TURN BACK FROM THE WORLD-KILLING WAY++

++否则生如死亡寂灭++

++OR YOU WILL LIVE AS DEATH AND DEVASTATION++

一天道且艰,不改其善一

一The Sky is the harder way. But it is kinder.一

一维衡我责,疲累我声—

一My charge is balanced: my voice exhausted.—

萨索娜之反驳

Sathona's Protest

姐妹们,我持父亲心爱之物。

Sisters,I have my father's familiar. 

看!其言朴素答我之问,其示助我寻得锋针,其予我力以挽希望。

Look! It answers me in plain words. Ilt helped me find this ship.lt gives me strength when hope is lost.

何者可信?此声欲我复昔日之为,困顿无望抗衡陶克斯与神威骇浪?或此苍白诚恳之蠕虫?

Who will you trust? The voice that wants us to live and suffer, as we have lived and suffered? The Leviathan that offers no hope against Taox orthe world-wave?

Or the plain, honest worm?

且看其低语引我辈至何处,奥拉什。且让我们继续深入,希洛!

Let us see where its whisper leads us, Aurash.Let us go deeper, Xi Ro!

继续下潜,我的姐妹们。

Let us dive, oh sisters mine.

三、注解补充与后记

       本篇为《忧愁之书》Verse 1:8,忧愁之书前文已发布,详见我的作品合集。

     《忧愁之书》讲述了邪魔族的前身——锇族的故事,锇之王廷的老国王膝下有三位公主,分别是奥拉什(Aurash)、萨索娜(Sathona)、希洛(Xi Ro),也分别是之后为我们所知的 欧里克斯/奥里克斯(Auryx/Oryx)、萨瓦图恩(Savathun)、希乌阿拉斯(Xivu Arath)这三位邪魔族的大BOSS,译名基本为音译,个别会与其他人翻译不同。

        本篇所记述之事是在三姐妹从宫廷虫母陶克斯密谋私通敌对势力氦饮者所发动的叛乱中侥幸逃生后的流亡途中发生,上述内容在《忧愁之书》前文有提及。三姐妹就此决定下潜至源洋深处,遭遇了利维坦,本文中主要记录了利维坦劝导三公主不要在深渊中寻求救赎的对话。 

        另外已经走过邪姬魅影主线剧情的朋友们可能对这方面的内容有所了解,剧情战役中讲述了一些与之相关的故事,以下放置一个CG视频链接,可以结合本文内容有所联系,为了不对一部分尚且没有走过剧情的噶点产生剧透,就不详细阐述具体细节了,打过战役的可以酌情回顾一下这个CG,感觉还是比较有意思的。

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